An X And His Boy

Post for constructive criticism. Comment here with any issues and flaws my characterization of Toothless may have.

Rules:

Crit doesn't mean act like a jerk.
OOC ≠ IC

Anonymous commenting is on.
Screening is off.
IP logging is off.

Player Information ;
Your Nickname: Surge
OOC Journal: sugarsurge
Under 18? No.
Email/IM: HPlus Future
Characters Played at Singularity: HAL 9000, PFC Lavernia Tucker

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